I think this comic could use some help
well i know im not a pro at comics, but i think this might help you maybe the textbubble could use a little more work D:
sorry if im not so helpfull but thats all.
Well, if you look right below you, there's a person commenting on the text bubbles.
I make my dialogue (no text tails, colored text instead) that way for two reasons:
1. It takes up less space. Quite often, the order of dialogue is not convenient to the way the characters are positioned, and if I had tails on the talk bubbles, they'd cross and take up a lot more room in the panel.
2. Though this wasn't intended at first, it's given my comic a bit of a unique style, because from what I've been told, very few comic authors display character dialogue the way I do.